Thank you so much for being such a lovely and a wonderful audience as ever. And I can't thank you enough. But my utmost gratitude and love for all of you who take out time, who have the patience, who have the intensity to hear my thought process, my poems that dive into the depth of darkness and somehow yet find light. Thank you so much for being such a lovely, lovely audience. And thank you so much for being a part of my journey
Deborah Pardes
@DBPardes · 1:17
I can't imagine how many people who are out there who are touched by the voices of strangers especially here and this particular poem is so full of surrender and trust and wonder and those are things that we want to carry with us all the time but we sometimes put on shields and we put protective clothing on to not get hurt but sometimes the cost of that is you're not impacted by the power and the beauty of something as simple as a stranger's voice
No matter how crushed, how defeated, how demoralized, when all hope seems gone, there is in the healthy person a small, inextinguishable flame of hope, like a faint but persistent pilot light that stays alight, much like the fire ancient man used to carry with him as he moved from place to place. And I guess this passage is the most crisp and smallest and precise explanation or parallel that I draw through your poetry
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Lots of success to you and may in the coming new year I am expecting some more great poems from your side that will make my new year more beautiful and bright. Thank you so much. Once again, best wishes lots. Jay Matari
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 1:45
It's to the strangers who crossed my path and imparted lessons that have stayed with me long after a brief encounter, to the nameless faces who showed me kindness when I was in need and inspired me to pay it forward to those unsung heroes who quietly persevered in the face of adversity and taught me resilience. This is a part of it, and this particular poem, whispers of the unknown, is very special to me, and I'm glad that it was your first swell of the day
Gunjan Joshi
@Bibliophile · 1:26
And I particularly like the line when you say that words that flow like a gentle stream so you could almost hear that entities entity's voice whose word flow like a gentle stream in this line. It is such a beautiful line. And also another line you say that a stranger's voice can dry our tears. So it is such a beautiful line that it assures you of a stranger that helps you to overcome a dark time by his or her soothing words
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 2:03
And yes, the human essence to go on and on is absolutely stunning. And when I started writing poetry, I thought to take it dark and dark. And with the second one I tried to maintain a balance. With third one I thought I'll try to do more set of dark poetry. But probably the fourth one I'm writing, it's someone which is on the darker side. But nonetheless, I sincerely appreciate what you have said
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 2:38
You can certainly see that photograph that I have attached into that reply. That is what it is to me, the colors of the heart. This book is for those unknown strangers who have made an amazing, inedible mark on my soul, on my character, on my thought process at a certain point of time in my life. So thank you so much. And yes, it's 30th December, tomorrow 31st, and the calendar would take away to first Jan 2024
So when you were actually speaking about whispers of the unknown I could actually get a picturization of lot more things that are actually moving in front of my eyes. So thank you so much for involving us and taking us to such a depths of the life and letting us understand the philosophy of life in such a beautiful and wonderful lines. Thank you so much others keep posting and have a great day