Now imagine if you could fathom bearing your heart and soul to a black magic Dragon whose words are fashion to make it appear more dashing, only to consume your ancestral light, leaving you fleeting, struggling through life with only a mere fraction. But that's the price that you pay when you pray in desperation for any type of physical attraction, you leave yourself vulnerable and open to the first death who sees your heart as an object poised for the s*****
Deborah Pardes
@DBPardes · 1:02
Hey, Kevin, I just want to jump in here. This is second swell I've listened to of yours, and I just enjoy where you take me. The rhythm and the vision rules are really compelling, and you challenge me a lot. Sometimes I resist some of your phrases, some of your perspectives that are different than mine
Kevin Smith
@TheeKevinSmith · 0:29
Thank you for listening and sharing your comments on the piece. I deeply appreciate you taking your time out to listen. If you wouldn't mind elaborating on the differences of perspectives that you mentioned in your comment, it will greatly help me develop my piece and also develop as an artist. Once again, I thank you for listening and taking your time out to share your comments
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Deborah Pardes
@DBPardes · 3:04
We have feelings, we're primal, we're carnal, we're human beings, and we can't be afraid of expressing our desire, having it be misrepresented as something that's disrespectful. And I think that's where I sit with your poetry, specifically Beauty in a Rush. So I hope that helps you. I don't think it needs any more coffee on your end or changing
Kevin Smith
@TheeKevinSmith · 0:52
Thank you for responding and going into detail about your thoughts or your feelings about the piece. That one line is a line that is not intricate in telling the story. And I thought it would be a little bit controversial, but I didn't really think it's all the way through when I was constructing a piece about the impact that one line would have on a total piece. So you absolutely helped me to grow as an artist in this comment section