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Mike W
@Scribe7 · 4:52

Essential Other part 1 ( Bear with me it's some pretty long pauses)

The doc looked at her as she shed a few tears and she said that's every nut and boat left over from putting that man back together for all these years. He said, do you need a minute? She said, no time to cry. Number one. Can we use the nuts and boats and will you let me try? I'm going to stop right there and catch you on the part two

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@AnngieKaye
Angela Kaye
@AnngieKaye · 0:22
Thanks. Hi, Mike. This was really good. I'm going to listen to part two and give you more feedback. But I love, love the part about the nuts and bolts that were left after after piecing together a man or putting a man back together again. That line and that whole concept is very powerful
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Carly D
@Astroality · 1:00
And I just have to say, every time I hear your voice, I'm just so captivated. Like, you could probably be saying some random nonsense, and I'd still love it. This was deep. It was deep, but so beautiful, Mike. I could picture the whole thing in my mind, and I could feel it with my entire heart. So thank you for sharing
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Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15

Welcome to Swell!

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Andrea Piggue
@Andrea_Speaks · 0:34
Oh, my goodness. So first of all snaps. That was awesome. I can't wait for part two. That was beautiful. That was definitely beautiful and definitely heartfelt. I felt the emotions in it and, yeah, I'm blown away. I'm on the way. That was awesome. I can't wait for part two. Please make sure you tag me in part two. I
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Mike W
@Scribe7 · 0:53

@Astroality

Thank you, thank you. Thank you for your kind words. Two is is done. I just don't know how to reswell it, but it's in, you know, it's in my posts and it's there. Yeah, it was a trying time, but, you know, sometimes just putting it on paper, people always say the journals and stuff, and Auntie's going to help me. I want to actually write a book. And I'm just journaling for now
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Mike W
@Scribe7 · 1:30

@Andrea_Speaks

And Auntie, she gave me some things, some queens and stuff, but I wanted to see if somebody thought that it was good or something I could do better, because I like to write, and when it comes to me, it just comes out. That was another part of my story, that it was a beautiful thing to see. And having that example is unbelievable
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