Burning, touching, licking at the very flames of your fire caressing, embracing, sweat laden bodies wrapped tight giving, receiving, intertwined in the perfect moonlight loving falling savoring the aftertaste of love well spent kissing holding eyes locked no words of how it went desiring needing never enough for their love to deny I keep me don't leave me never leave me asking why thank you for listening
I love this poem, Renee. It was really cool. What I love about it is the cadence, the rhythm of this piece, how it hits each note as you talk it through at exactly the right place. And it's like a drumbeat, and just it goes through you straight to the bone. There's just this perfect cadence. And I really, really appreciate that