Does your sex crave what I found as I suck on my lip then replace with fingertips while I stare at your eyes slowly opening thighs fingers trailing down are you coming like I'm coming to? Am I close enough to you? On my knees to my hands stalking, commanding your attention seductive demanding till my heat it is fanned and I appear right where you stand and but am I close enough to you? Your pulse pounding, it's racing too close?
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:22
OOH queen. Wow, that was like some delicious dessert. I was eating really slowly. I loved your delivery too. Yes, keep rocking it. And that photo is hot
Yes, I love this piece. Absolutely brilliant, beautiful, gorgeous, sensual, sexy, everything. All of the things, girl. All of the things. Mama, I love you so much for putting yourself out there in this way and for being vulnerable and opening yourself up to all the new things. Because I feel like that right now, we are in the season of the new
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Carly D
@Astroality · 0:14
Girl. This one's so good. I think part of it, too, is just like, the specific way that you read it. Like, the pauses, the voice, like, the whole thing. I love it. Good job. Thanks for sharing. I appreciate
Jaisha Jansena
@jaishajansena · 0:22
You. Hey, Renee. I love this poem so much. It was just so evocative, and it conjured up so many vibes for me. It's just incredibly, incredibly intoxicating. Thank you so much for sharing
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:26
Yay. Yay. I love that you liked it. Love, love that you saw it as a delicious dessert, because that's what I was kind of thinking of too. I was nervous about my delivery because I literally am bad about reading off of scratched paper that I just completed and haven't even I don't know, I get excited and I just go to post it. So thank you. Thank you for that
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 1:03
Girl. Girl, you did. You started a revolution. And it is all about going back to that time and that place. Not many here know that I was a dancer, but you know exactly where this is coming from, so wow. Yeah. This is my first time ever even attempting to put something quite this deep inside of me out and looking at it and being like, you know what? It was? It was a hot time. It was a hot period. It was me
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:17
Okay, so you're next. We're waiting on your erotic poetry here. Got a whole group of us on here that are just waiting to hear it. I appreciate you taking the time to listen to it and for appreciating the sexuality of it because without the pauses, it would probably look like a hot mess. Thank you so much again
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:19
Hey. Hey. I love so much that you got into this. I appreciate you taking the time to not only listen to it, but to reply, because that means everything. So you're next. We've all started a snowball here of the erotic. So bring it. Thank you for listening