All shackles, as silky whispers reveal her love of all of him. Then, like magic, he is alone in the chamber, breathing her into him until they meet again
What I love love about this piece is that it speaks to hidden desires and fetishes with gentleness and with peaceful and loving understanding. There is a piece in this poetry that speaks to us having the capability to accept in others what we might not understand, but to know that it doesn't make them any less as a human being and that they have the right to express that which makes them whole
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:41
Girl. Yes. I'm so excited that you were pumped about this one. You have been an inspiration. As far as me putting that out there. And I don't know if you remember when we were on the phone and I told you, well, I wrote one about a dominatrix. Here it is. And it does it twists up the angle a little bit. Embrace your freak, whatever it is, and just let it be
Natasha Webb
@NatashaNoel · 2:25
And she just hit the nail on the head. I agree with everything she just said, but anyway, I love this. This is great. Oh, my goodness. You need to write more of the eroticus type. You're really good. And it was perfect. There's no criticism there, for sure, but I'm just really floored that you were able to put that in poetry form so eloquently and on point and without missing a beat. It just flowed so well. Anyway
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:22
You. The dragon has awakened and she is writing everything down. This breakfast buffet of poems that you serve today is incredible. All these flavors. I'm enjoying all of it
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:23
Yay. I love that you heard it and I love that it may just stutter. I gotta start letting my freak flag fly a little bit more in my poetry because, girl, I'm liking the erotic stuff too. And I don't know if you've read some of the stuff that Pixie poet wrote, but she is an inspiration to us all. For sure. Anyway, thank you so much for the positive feedback and I hope to make you stutter again
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:12
Thank you, thank you, thank you, you beautiful creature. I am so happy that I'm getting such positive feedback on these and can't wait to put out some more. Thank you, Mama