When I was all broken, when all the ways of my happiness were hidden I went to place where we had the love splash. You made my day. There were no reasons for the grief to stay. You put your soul in our bond but now they are just the scenarios of haunt. I loved the memory. Memories of that life which was all filled with mischievous strife. My steps took me to the sea sour. Our memories had a loud roar. I wished you could be there
J.L. Beasley
@Her_Sisu · 0:52
Hi Priya. It is JL. Happy New Year. What a beautifully written piece. I was mesmerized by the imagery, listening to your voice. I heard a mixture of a love story to life in a sense, talking about just the ebbs and flows of life joy, love, grief and then how it all combines to create such beauty. That's what resonated with me as I stared into the imagery of the sun which is consistent and constant in our life
Priya kashyap
@Priya_swell_ · 0:25
Well, hello ma'am. It's 06:24 p.m. In India and good evening from my side. Thank you so much for your lovely appreciation and the way you explained everything which I have written my poetry well, this was an imagined poetry which I have written few moments ago and I really loved my appreciation and the way you told all the things. So thanks a lot. Have a great day
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Hello, Priya. Beautiful poetry as it's now. Of course, sea is one place which will hold so many memories. Especially if you have visited a seashore with your loud ones. And for some reasons, you have to part ways with your loud one. When you go back to the seashore alone, the memories will be haunt. Sometimes it can burn you too. And what better way than to ask See to come to you and heal you. A well written poetry. Enjoy listening to it
Priya kashyap
@Priya_swell_ · 0:05
Thank you, ma'am. Thank you so much for your appreciation and the way you do the things. Thank you