The story of three friends
They would always talk for us in school while having lunch together, spending time together and off school while walking back home. Talking and laughing about random stuff, creating memories and enjoying themselves. They were together from class first to fifth until when their section got changed in class six. They were sad at that moment, but couldn't do anything. Purvey didn't know anyone from her class and had to make a new friend
Aysha Nihidha
@Nichuz_Ash · 1:33
I really enjoyed your story but I would like to find a few things that could use improvement. First of all, what problems occurred between them should have been elaborated or how the third person being left out was cleared. The misunderstanding of how she became more inclusive the issues, how they kept in touch, those could be highlighted so the story could be expanded or at least one problem could be introduced and solved that would make the story much more interesting