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preethy uthup
@peeli · 1:49

Some day !

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But here I am watching the lighthouse light to pass by, so that I can watch the ships passing by. And I say to myself, this too shall pass. But here I am watching the lighthouse light to pass by, so that I can watch the ships passing by. And I say to myself, this too shall pass. I hope you all like this poem, and please let me know how you feel about it

This too shall pass - a poem

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Ranjana Kamo
@Gamechanger · 0:43
That's a beautiful poem. This too shall pass. Yes. I think every storm is there for some reason. And then it does pass and leaves us sometimes happy and sometimes just disheveled and confused. But I think at the end of the day, there is always some light for us. So thank you for sharing this. And the lighthouse will definitely bring light into our life. Have a lovely evening. Bye
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Himanshi Thakur
@GreyMatter · 3:15
And there is never a guarantee that the one who you love will love you back. So it's just melancholic. It's just heartbreaking because I have been in such situations a couple of times and it just takes something away from you. So, yeah, thank you. Thank you for bearing it down. Because I think when you are a writer, author or a poet, a poetress, in your case, writing brings a lot of peace or it is cathartic in some sense
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Challa Sri Gouri
@challasrigouri · 1:17
Hi, Preeti. It was such an amazing poem. And I could feel the kind of depth of the feelings. Like the moment you decide to spend your whole life, whatever comes, whether it is a storm, whether it is a challenge, whatever it comes, you feel like we will be facing it together. And suddenly the person who has to be along with you and catch hold of your hand and then show you the beauty of the world leaves you in between and goes away from you
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Meenu Kaur
@tailored979 · 1:51
And definitely this negative flash of light takes its own time. But yes, it's always a hopeful sentence. This too shall pass. I have gone through one such phase, so I can relate very well. It takes immense courage to stand up each day and say this. This too shall pass. And we know this passing is not that easy. It's the toughest and it's the longest passing by which we go. And hence we come out strong and someone with a clear vision
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preethy uthup
@peeli · 1:40

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So when you do surfing, actually when the big wave comes, if you don't hold on to that surfing board, it just takes you out of it. And then from 1 minute you really don't know where you are. But then again, you hold on to that surfing board and then you kind of understand, oh, I'm quite okay with this. So this is a sort of dishevel feeling sometimes I get. But I know that my poem says this too shall pass
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Ranjana Kamo
@Gamechanger · 0:49
Hello. Thank you so much. Oh, I'm so glad that I really want to surf. And when I watch people surfing, it is such an exhilarating experience. And, yeah, that would be so nice to ride all those waves. And definitely when it just tries to throw you off your balance, then that's a different story altogether. But yes, it has. It probably just, it summarizes life in such a concise form, all the emotions of life contained in that surfing
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Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15

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Ranjana Kamo
@Gamechanger · 0:25
And I forgot to add one more point, Peeli, that, you know, your faith in God, your hope, please hold on to it because that is the best lighthouse that can lead us. And I think it is the biggest support that we could get. So thank you for your beautiful poetry. Have a lovely weekend. Bye
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preethy uthup
@peeli · 4:56

@GreyMatter

So again, a defiance of. Against repression is clearly shown. I think when I read this book, I will definitely get a better idea to it. And then the last part of it, which I liked was transformation and healing. The act of storytelling has a force of transformation, of healing, actually, that is catharatic
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preethy uthup
@peeli · 1:58

@challasrigouri

Hi, Kaur. I think you really understood the essence of the poem. And it's true, like, you know, but people come into a life and you see something, you look forward for it with that person, as you said. But sometimes, for no fault of theirs or us, it of mine, it just happens that they have to go their way. And it is heartbreaking. But when you approach it in a very philosophic way, that. Of course it crumpled
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preethy uthup
@peeli · 3:40

@tailored979

Good afternoon, Mino. I was so touched and happy. You know, you have really deciphered each sentence and each meaning of this poem and given it a real thought to it as to why that could be like that and why it's like that. And yeah, as you said, you know, it takes a lot, lot of strength to come back and fight your battles
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Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 2:15
That's an experience I would definitely love to have. I've been to one lighthouse in Goa at the top of it, and it just amazes me and fascinates me at times. So kudos to you on this one. It's absolutely well written, it's beautifully articulated. And the emotions are in tune with the thought process that you want to evoke from this poem. Ah, that's wonderful. Short and sweet. And I'll see you around. You. You have a terrific Sunday
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