It is all the rishis and the hermits and the prophets used to say, look within you. Because the soul and body has to get in tandem, together and in perfect harmony. And that's a time when you feel the most happiest. So we are born like that, and that is a perfect harmony. And when we are in harmony with ourselves, we will be in harmony with others also. So this is a sort of introspection I have gone through
Hi Peeli, you are absolutely right. When things go wrong, we usually tend to look at the outer part. But one thing we all should learn is looking at the inner thing. Looking trying to understand the things through our inner self. We have to look within us because introspection will actually give you the true cause for everything that is happening around. And I do agree with everything that you have mentioned and this poem is such a self reflecting one. I really loved it
Ranjana Kamo
@Gamechanger · 0:25
Hi. Peeli. This is another gem from you. And yes, you can only soar when you are looking inwards. Though it might seem contradictory, but that is how it is. And I love this thought. And thank you so much for sharing it with us. Have a lovely evening. Bye
Intellect, body, mind, intellect and the soul are in alignment I think that's the best and harmonious place to be. Beautiful poem there. Thank you so much for sharing and also for inviting me to this conversation
Maurice Lekea
@malekea · 2:43
Hello pretty. I hope you are doing well and having a good day. This poem is beautiful. Not in a generic way, because the message through this poem is beautiful. That what you said at the end that resumed the entire poem about one harmony. If you are not in harmony with yourself, you can never be. I mean, it will be difficult for you to be in harmony with other people. It will be difficult to connect with other people
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 3:57
People around, those I used to find difficult, whom I was not able to look forward to in certain aspects. This particular aspect helped me so your poem reminded me of my struggling days to understand a certain set of emotions. And this was a turning point where I started looking at emotions from a very deep and a different perspective. And that helped me evolve not just as a writer, that's a separate thing, but as an individual itself