The because the so sad happiness the I love you because you complete me the worthy love of a diver in slavishness because I love you because you do not complete me the forgetting Eden began a night mother let her guard down and we made each other without presupposition. Beethoven could take my little fingers to Coparticipate with the moon
Glenn Mann
@GlennPriceMann · 0:12
Wow. That's an amazing poem. That's just beautifully composed and just a really amazing thank you for sharing that
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:39
Stephen. I am slooning. Wow. That was so beautifully crafted. The night Mother let her guard down. Yes. I don't know if you meant to do this, but the end of the poem was cut off because I was reading it as you were citing it. So I'm not sure if you want to repost with the whole thing, or if you meant to do that. But anyway, I just wanted to thank you. This was really beautiful. Thank you
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Creative Reader
@MoonPoet · 1:36
So the original title was Happenstance you left your luculent skin on my night table again something to do with all of my dreams. The because the so sad happiness the I love you because you complete me. The worthy love of a diver in slavishness. Because I love you because you do not complete me
Isoellen Writes
@Isoellen · 1:05
I just have to pay homage to the juiciness of your word choices. You just don't get to honor and explore and color with words like that that often and in such ways. And you don't meet other people who are, who are trying to capture just the perfect color or for the perfect moment. And maybe you can't quite get it and so you pick something else and you put it in the place and you're like, no, that one's not going to work