Um, hello. This is Stephen, and I'm going to share another one to continue on with Poetry month. This one is titled Vulnerable. For a long time, I have secretly insisted that the moon and I have lived similar adventures. It. But the truth is that we cry. Unlike tears, I hide my face and want a caress afterwards so that I might fall into the miraculous conjunction of absorbent, loves and smile again
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:12
This is really beautiful. I really like this a lot. I want to thank you first for sharing it. And, man, it's deep. I like it. I like it a lot. Thank you
Becky Butler
@bc75 · 2:46
I really enjoyed this piece, Steven. Thank you for sharing those vulnerable places that we tend to keep quiet and to ourselves so as to not disrupt the delicately balanced weights on each side of us so that we can stabilize and stand strong. Vulnerability is viewed as weakness in certain cultures, but vulnerability is where beauty and strength are derived. To be vulnerable, you have to permit the walls to go down. You have to permit the windows to be open and the lights turned on to see what's there
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Melody Jones
@MelodyJones · 0:27
You. Hey, Steven. Melody here. I really liked your phrase, unlike tears. I thought that was a powerful way to talk about differences. And I thought the entire piece was certainly instructive toward that vulnerability that you talk about. And I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it
Glenn Mann
@GlennPriceMann · 0:13
I just wanted to say thank you for sharing that. That was really beautiful poem and just really I just love the sort of the idea and notion behind it and the sentiment that it invokes. So thank you for sharing
I loved it in every way, shape and form, and it gave me another image and concept of the moon that is just so appreciated. So I want to thank you for inviting me and just keep them coming. I am loving it. They are beautiful. Your poetry is amazing
Anisah Khan
@Anisah_Writes · 1:55
Hey there, Steven. This is nissa. Honestly, I love any poetry that deals with the moon or talks about the moon because it's such a beautiful light source at night and it's always accompanied by the stars. So I appreciate you sharing this poem. And I feel like your poem, it represents wanting to be comfort and wanting to be loved and just sharing memories with the moon