@MelodyJones
Melody Jones
@MelodyJones · 1:18

Abundant Body - a free verse poem

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And there's nothing wrong with this cushion of comfort, nothing wrong at all. Until society notices their hateful opinion is a misuse of the divinity granted humans in the form of thought and collective consciousness, and as is our free will, right, we use our divinity to beat down those of abundant body who only seek to do what we all do and gain that bit of comfort, that moment of softness

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@Digitalpenz
You. Wow. Yes. I like that melody. That was really, really good. That was really, really good. Thank you for sharing that with us. Thank you
@MelodyJones
Melody Jones
@MelodyJones · 0:17

@Digitalpenz

Ah, well, thank you so much for replying. I really, really appreciate that. I'm new to Swell, and this is just the third time I've recorded something, and I'm trying to catch up with all the good stuff here on Swell, and I just appreciate you taking time to send a reply. Thank you
@Swell
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15

Welcome to Swell!

@MoonPoet
Creative Reader
@MoonPoet · 0:58
Hello. This is Stephen, and I'm glad you shared this one. It made me think and reflect a little bit this morning. You know, unfortunately, we live in a pretty judgmental era, and it's good to shift our perspective a little bit and maybe try to see things with a little bit of empathy or in a different way than the mainstream that kind of just berates people for their flaws. So, yeah, I enjoyed this one. I it I found it pretty unique
@MelodyJones
Melody Jones
@MelodyJones · 0:29

@MoonPoet

You. Hey, thanks so much for giving feedback on the Abundant body poem I posted. I think it needs a little refining in the middle part of that poem, but clearly the intent of it, the message of it, was clear. And it is unique for sure, because I moved from, like chips to porcupine quills. So I just appreciate you taking the time to reply. Thank you so much
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