Some thoughts from my deathbed

All I could see were his eyes, and they were all I needed to see. He walked closer, shutting the door behind him. I jumped to my feet and leaned in for an embrace, the one that usually serves as the comforting silence that is interspersed between the storms of my life. I closed my eyes and as we felt at one, a smile escaped me. My eyes jolted open in pain and realization of the dagger that had been jammed into my back

#poetry #thoughtexperiment #firstswell

Rocío (Ro) Christensen
@rocio · 0:12
Oh, you're so good at, like, building and maintaining suspense. Yeah, I really like this. Thank you for sharing, and welcome to swell. I'm so happy you're here
Radhika Agrawal
@lunaticsoul · 0:21

@rocio

That is really encouraging. Thank you so much for the listen and love that you enjoyed my little piece. I love writing and talking, so I think swell might be the right app to get some of those energies released. Thank you anyway. Bye bye. Have a great day