@Loloflow
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:44

In My Dream

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In my dream. ketzel Cuado watches over everything I am doing in great approval. I watch over you with salivating mouth. You watch my dress move when I walk, my lips when I talk. We're sitting in your car picking songs and laughing. You're overthinking about how to get your hand higher up on my thigh. Just start the car. Take me anywhere in the morning. The bedsheets were soaked in possibility

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@MoonPoet
Creative Reader
@MoonPoet · 0:35
Hi, lolo. It's Stephen. I am glad to be the first one to get to comment on this one. I'm sure you're going to get lots of replies. You've done something magical with it. You made some kind of seductive connection to a morning star. I'd love to essential wordplay like start car and soaked in possibilities. Really well done. Thank you
@Loloflow
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:19

@MoonPoet

Hey, Steven. Thanks so much for listening. I really appreciate your insights. And you catching on to the word play. It just brings me so much joy to do that, as I'm sure it does for you, too. So thanks
@Swell
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15

Welcome to Swell!

@nourishyou
Adenike Nana Esie
@nourishyou · 1:07
Oh, like Stephen, I enjoyed this little vignette. I enjoyed it for all the laden, unspoken, want, possibility, desire, adventure, that it's kind of hanging in the air in each other's thoughts. And I think that's what makes it so essential. The art of sensual is very much about less is more. And this was very enticing, very tender, very intimate kind of moment. I enjoyed it. And the word play as well was a fun twist
@Quinne
Quinne Brown Huffman
@Quinne · 0:13
That was a wonderful sensual sharing. What a beautiful piece. So visceral and so very real. Good morning. Have a great day
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