I've tripped a faulty wire and everyone conspires life's the same but holds no name under a blue gray sky people admire who paints the sunsets yellow and forms the waves and choir men's the town full sweet with wine if Tree surrendered, so will I
Rocío (Ro) Christensen
@rocio · 0:27
Hey, Levi, I really like what you're doing in this in this poem. I really love the, like, internal rhymes that happened here and there. The alliteration I feel like it's yeah, like, I don't know. You really captured something. There's, like, an intensity to it just by the sound of the words and the letters, and I love that. I think it matches the content of the piece very well