𝚃𝚑𝚎 𝙿𝚎𝚛𝚜𝚙𝚎𝚌𝚝𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝙾𝚏 𝚃𝚑𝚎 𝙼𝚘𝚘𝚗 🌘 (𝙰 𝙿𝚘𝚎𝚖)
She does what only she can do. She is the moon. She is confident, always cycling and making the same journey in a different journey simultaneously. When she's in one of many phases, the sky appears dark. The moon seems to conceal herself, but it is entirely a misconception of perception not fully understood by those who view her but still cannot see her. She is the moon. She is the moon. Thank you. All right
Chelsea Hanawalt
@allowthesun · 0:30
It. She does not make apologies for the craters in her face. OOH. I really resonated with that line. I love the moon. I follow the lunar cycles and always do little rituals like on the new and the full moon. And I just I love all the phases of the moon, and this poem really represented that. So thank you
And I'm just so glad to have the opportunity to interact with you and connect with you and to see poetry and writing from another perspective spoken with another voice, a voice that is truly beautiful. Thank you for including me. I appreciate you so much
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:54
And it is the depth of a woman, the depth of a woman being on one journey and another at the same time, always at love it, love it, love it. It is woman to me
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:16
Let me just add one thing so that there's no misperception. She is strong a woman. She is powerful woman. Not just any woman. I love it
It was definitely what I was going for. And that is so awesome about the virtual. I have made moon water I once and I am always learning, so maybe there's something to share there and something to learn. Thank you for listening again
Thank you for taking the time to listen to it and giving me this feedback and telling me how it made you feel, because that is one of the most important things. I love to know how it makes people feel what I've written, because I'm writing for myself, but not just for self expression. It is something to be given and it is so encouraging. So thank you so, so much. Bye
Hey. Thank you so much for your comment. Thank you. That just made me so excited and so happy and so proud. But it's exactly what you said. I imagined myself as the moon. And so the perspective is of the moon based on the different things that moon actually goes through physically