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Tanzy Chandler
@Find_My_Voice · 4:54

Fire

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We were going to split the room down the middle so that Darryl and his brother Ruelle could sleep on one side and me and Mitsu were going to sleep on the other side. We had it all planned out. We were going to move in together, and it was everything was going to be fine. Well, shortly into our preparation, my father came upstairs and called Darryl and Ruel and explained to us that everything was under control. The fire was put out and it was safe to go back home
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Rocío (Ro) Christensen
@rocio · 0:55
Honestly, your voice sounds incredibly strong, and I loved you have such a good sense for storytelling. I was so invested in in in this and what was happening to five year old you that when you brought it into the present of, like, why why do we freak out so much about the imminent future if if, you know, we have these skills when we're when we're little, we have this ability to think on the fly and to problem solve. Wow. I don't know
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Tanzy Chandler
@Find_My_Voice · 0:39

@r.o

Thank you so much for your thoughtful reply and for listening. This has really been an eye opening experience for me. Your feedback helped me to see that the purpose of my story was met. The goal was met. Even if I wasn't completely satisfied with the delivery or the execution, there are things that I would like to change. But the takehome message seems like was understood. So I appreciate you taking the time to listen to it and to share your feedback. Thank you
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