I'm floating, swimming, submerged in you enveloped in your essence bathing in you, breathing in exhaling inhaling your everything drinking up your masculinity my lips trickle desire all over your canvas filling you up to your overflow now I am drenched dancing in you. So that was in you. And you may have seen on my profile that I'm a beat maker. It's totally a hobby
Oh, f***. Yes. That was f****** awesome. Fire. I loved that. I was so shocked when the beat came in and there was this musical element. I wasn't expecting that because I hear a lot of poetry here on Swell, and I am a writer and a poet and I love, love, love poetry and words, but I'm just so used to the typical recitation of poetry spoken word
feliceskye
@feliceskye · 1:42
I know I've said appreciate like 50 times, but yes, I do. I've just got mad appreciation for your reply and I'm glad that it moved you. It's one of my favorite poems. I've been reciting that poem for so long and I definitely had to include it in that book and in the EP because it was a staple go to almost one of those poems that I would do as a primer during open mic just to kind of get myself grounded
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:37
Holy s***. I wasn't even ready, girl. That was hot. That was very hot. And something about the beat with it and the echo of your voice made it hotter. That's intense. Like, how perfect is that? And I love that you express your different avenues for your creativity. I love creativity in any form. So you are definitely bringing it. Definitely bringing it
feliceskye
@feliceskye · 0:23
I'm so glad that you liked it. And, yeah, I'm grateful. I'm grateful for you all and your feedback and for this platform and to be able to share. And I'm looking forward to experiencing all of what you all have to share. Thanks again