You. It's humid in my bones. I can smell the fire erupting from my gut. All consuming, destructive. Trying to save my wretched heart. Shocking it with ice percolating. No peace or quiet. With a consistent storm raging on. Taking different shapes and forms of torture. Feeling of helplessness crushing me. I try over and over again to break free from the shackles of my own mind
Hi. This poem, I could really understand the in depth meaning that you would loved or you wanted to convey through this poem. Humid and the kind of vocabulary and the kind of voice modulations that you have used in order to present your poem and forward in front of us is really amazing. I really enjoyed it thoroughly and I loved the vocabulary you used in it. Thank you so much for sharing. Have a great day
dwijisha katkar
@dwi · 0:14
You. This honestly means the whole world to me. Thank you for your kind words. And I have been having a few shitty days, so, yeah, this really brightens my mood a lot. Thank you. Thank you so much
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 3:17
And thank you so much, Ashani, you have been very kind enough and you have been very rigorous enough to share such gems which are there on twelve platforms. So thank you so much and I wish you all the best. And please let me know your name, pronunciation. I do not want to mumble it up. And if I had done, my deepest and sincerest apologies. So, Dwi, thank you so much for sharing this lovely, intricate, gut wrenching poem with us