This piece is called be my Valentine. A day of love, a night of romance. Forget about a week in France. All you are going to want to do is dance. A quiet escape. Know you can relate to the feelings I feel the love is real the COVID is blown the secret is out it's no way something so powerful and poetic could not be prolific the sound that escapes is one where we all can relate. Love is more than a desire love is something to admire
Cheyonia Wade
@Chey · 0:37
You if you take the time to listen to this one. I'd really like to know your thoughts on this piece. I tried my hand at incorporating, like, the free flow of it with the rhyming, and the question was, kind of like, to throw you off a little bit real quick. But I'd like to know how this one was received. It's a little different from what I usually do. It
Because, yeah, I think a lot of people are interested in love nowadays because every time I put up a poem based on kind of knowledgeable stuff and modern times, so called modern times and all this, people will listen, but they're kind of funny with that. And then when I put up anything that has to do with love and passion, it draws more attention. So I seem to enjoy it now more
Shawna Kearsley
@OnAcornBay · 3:16
Your poem, be my Valentine. I love it. I think it is about love. Mind of rage. I listen to your response as well, and I think that is a beautiful idea, a marketable idea for the masculine and the feminine, the yang and the yang, to come together in poetry. I really don't see a lot of that, interestingly enough. And I am on a poetic exploration here, leading my town in poetry
Glenn Mann
@GlennPriceMann · 0:46
This is a really lovely poem, and I really love that line. Forget about a week in France, all you want to do is dance. That's really this really memorable line. And I really love the tone and the style of the poem. I really love the conversational aspect of it. I kind of tend to sort of like those type of poems where it feels like you're sort of in the middle, beginning of a very intimate conversation. So I really love that
Cheyonia Wade
@Chey · 3:49
And it's like, okay, now you have all this love and all this time and attention for the art of loving and the poetry, what do you do with it? And I stumbled upon this, and it's been beautiful so far. But I think in today's day and time, people are looking to hear what we don't get anymore. Like, even the music is changing, and it's like, bitch, this, hold that
Cheyonia Wade
@Chey · 0:50
I really do appreciate the feedback that means so much to me, and it just reaffirms that what I was going for. Like, you picked up on it, you noticed it. I appreciate that. Thank you
Cheyonia Wade
@Chey · 1:57
So I look forward to seeing where it heads. And I am glad to hear that you are delving into and leading your town in the quest of poetry because it really is a very vivid and colorful world that is too often overlooked. And artists put a lot of talent, they put a lot of time and thought into their work. So I love when people actually take the time to look into it and research it or dissect it, and that's the purpose of it
