Cosmic Diaster
You cosmic Disaster waves of hair ebbing from the edges of the universe, existing as magic in between millions of worlds suspended and yet animated in translike sensuality playing around Titans with the depths of her sexuality. Cosmic dust disturbed with every groin of her hips, the nectar dripping from the moistness of her lips, arching her back, revealing the grace of her spine breasts on fire from the essence of pure divine
Himanshi Thakur
@GreyMatter · 1:14
Hi, candy. Thank you for your invitation. And I literally listened to it like thrice it's absolutely mesmerizingly. Beautiful. What a beautiful creation. And, you know, usually we personify a country or, you know, we call earth as mother earth, but it seemed like as if you have personified entire universe, entire cosmos into this powerful birth, giver feminine divine energy. That's absolutely mind blowing. I'm truly blown away by that creation. It so beautiful
Tara pushkar
@Tarapushkar · 0:35
Hey Candy. Such a lovely share. Each lines are beautifully crafted. Totally mesmerized. One can, you know oh my God, your voice is like therapeutic. One can meditate on each lines that you have written. And you would be also surprised to know today I am also writing on Mother Earth and I'm just going to step soon. I hope you're going to enjoy that one as well. So thanks for the share. Love you. Lots of love
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
And the kind of energy that you have represented in the form of lines, the feminine energy that you have given to that is really really exciting and amazing. Thank you so much for such a beautiful swell
And I must say that you have skillsfully portrayed, the immense cosmic, immense power and how the cosmic cosmos blend into the space and time and their rentlessness and pull that not even a single light can escape. And your words beautifully convey the dance of these celestial giants and how they challenge our understanding of the cosmos and how beautifully you relate each word and connect each word. It's really commendable
Hello, himanshi. And I'm so glad that you enjoyed this poem. And, you know, I went ahead and listened to all the responses for this particular poem, and I saw that every person who read this saw it as a personification of the universe and the cosmos and as a writer. You know, it's really funny how it completely evaded me. I really didn't I missed the personification part of it
Hello, Tara. And I was deeply complimented when you said that my voice is therapeutic, and I think my ego is well fed for today. And thanks for appreciating the beauty of the words. I think it takes one poet to another to really appreciate that, and I spend a lot of time, like, picking the right words and to make it flow and also to get the imagery that I desire. So, yeah, there is a beauty in those words. And you know what? Absolutely
I didn't really expect that. I think it's interesting to see how people hear the poem and then their own thoughts on it. So thanks for sharing, and I'm so happy that my topics or whatever out. It kind of drives your creation, your creative energy as well. That makes me so happy, and I'm happy to do that always. So thank you. Thank you for your words, as always, and I hope you have an amazing day
And when other people look at it, they have different thoughts that are steered in them and that's quite amazing. And it was interesting to hear about your thoughts and how this poem made you think and what it made you feel. And you thought about the universe, the vastness of the universe and the powers and the mysteries and this is what it stimulated in your mind. So it was really, really interesting to hear your thoughts and what you heard in this poem