Poem: The Crack in my Mind
I'm curious to know what your thoughts are about this. What do you think about the topic, the poetry or the theme? Whatever you like, or that you just enjoyed it for whatever it is, I am very thankful that you did. And I hope, hope you have an amazing day and also enjoy the weekend. All right, and I'll catch you in the next one, as always. Bye
Geetha Kariappa
@angelface7 · 1:23
Hi candy. That was a wonderful innovation. Indeed, in its actor simplicity you have conveyed profound takeaway. And that too about mental illness, mental health, and our responsibility to take care of our mental health. And the way you wrote that poem, it feels like a mini drama where two people are interacting and you can easily see who is dominating the person who tells that there is a crack in the wall and the other person is just ignoring it until there is a wide crack
Gunjan Joshi
@Bibliophile · 1:04
And I would just say that by controlling these four factors, such as denial, sob, distraction, and then blame, we can control our entire mental health, our entire inner cells also. So once again, a very beautiful masterpiece. Keep writing and keep presenting. Bye
Ranjana Kamo
@Gamechanger · 0:09
You. Thank you for this poem, and I look forward to your song on Sunday. Just take care. Have a lovely weekend. Bye
Hello. Good afternoon, and thank you so much for enjoying this poem and also giving me your in depth feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And definitely I was going for very deep, complex elements of mental health, but I wanted to put it in a simple way that can be easily understood, almost like, as you said, like a drama playing out, right, with the different dynamics. So thank you. And it really encourages me to explore this type of poetry
Hello, Gunjan. Good afternoon. And thank you so much for your detailed review and also your words. I know they're always sincere whenever you give me a response on a swell or a poetry. So thanks for that. And, you know, it's definitely very experimental. First time I'm trying out this style where there's this dialogue, actually, that's happening, and very simple as as well