Poem: Purest Essence
Okay, so a lot of abstract playing around with a lot of abstract ideas, but all the same, I hope you enjoyed. Please do share your thoughts. Or if you're just here for a poetry reading, I hope you had a good listen as well and as have an awesome rest of the week, whatever is left, and I'll catch you, as always, in the next vlog. Bye
Wow, candy, this was one of your best. I literally visualized that, you know, the snowflakes melting, merging into tears, like. And then, you know, those are, like, tributaries. Then I imagine the tears, you know, dripping down the chin and then being caught in a cup. It's beautifully visualizing. What's a better way of saying you can visualize how beautifully you have woven these words together? Awesome job. I totally enjoy it
Hey, I'm so excited, you know, that this is one of the best poems that you've heard from me. That makes me feel super, super excited. And I love the, I love the feedback, and I love the, you know, I loved how you described what captured, you know, captured you about it. So thanks for that. Thanks for your comments, and thanks for your warm response. And it makes me feel excited to write honestly