We were drawn together when we were only dust and swirling masses. An ideation and a mere concept. Our particles were intertwined, reaching out for one another to meet in this solitary existence. We were one even before we were born in strange places to strangers who would become our family. The world spun round, drawing us closer across continents, across countries, across time until we collided into one another at the perfect time. Till we found one another in this world to be one again
Gunjan Joshi
@Bibliophile · 0:54
Good evening. Candy. The poem you presented is so sensuous, alluring and primal and describes love that truly empowers both the individuals. I never knew that you could be so romantic. From your voice. You seem to be a commanding person, but lovely to know this facet of you. In addition, the poem you wrote describes a love that is very primitive in origin and in which the individuals know each other without having met each other. And they really know each other since many births
Yuvraj Jain
@yjain60 · 1:50
You. I'll always be appreciative of the fact that whatever you share, whatever you bring in, you do not forget to add that music in your background. And that is what makes it so beautiful and so serene to hear you. And even the voice that you carry. It is so beautifully said. It's a lovely combination of sensuality, romance, love, affection, deep love and all of that
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Hi, Candy. Really, your poem was amazing. And the way you described it and the way the lines that you used, really, they were amazing. And as I told you, every time, whenever you come up with certain poem, the reader gets a feeling as if everything is happening in front of their eyes and they could feel it and sense it. So that's what happens with me every time
Hello, Gunjan. I hope you're having a lovely day. Your response really made me blush because, yes, I am a very deep romantic and I'm strongly swayed by my emotions. A sensual person which I hide from the rest of the world for some reason. And sometimes these expressions come through my words and I can't control it
Hello, Yuvi, hope you're having a beautiful and gorgeous day. Thank you for your warm words and encouragement. You know, when it comes to this type of swell, I really started these doing this swell kind of like experimentally. I didn't really know what I was doing. So now I feel like it's a process in development, especially writing creatively and putting music. And honestly, when it comes to the music, it does take a lot of thought
Hello and hope you're having the start of a beautiful weekend. And I'm so happy to hear that. I really was able to transport you through my words and the music into another, like into another realm, I guess. So I really like it that you say that because I really want to create an Immersive experience where the person listening is just caught in the flow of the words. That's really my intention. So that gives me such happiness to hear
Himanshi Thakur
@GreyMatter · 1:22
It was so warm, and it just took me across universes and across time and space. It was wonderful. And I smiled like an idiot the entire time I was listening to your poem. So thank you. Thank you for sharing. And I can definitely see these improvements in your expressions. It's wonderful. Keep writing, Candy. Keep swelling, keep sharing and keep growing. Take care, and I hope you have a great week ahead. I'll see you around
Jeremiah Myer
@Jeremiah73 · 0:52
Hello. Your poem is so, so very lovely. It's it's so deep and so sensual, and it really tugs at not only my heartstrings, but my soul strings as well. It's just really a testament to your skill as a writer of poetry. You should be very proud of what you have accomplished here. It's simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing this. Bye