Poem: The Beauty of a Man
Hello, everyone, and welcome to the swell. And I'm going to be doing a poetry reading today. And you cannot imagine how excited I am to read this poem. And this is something new that I tried out, and it's a concept I've been thinking about for a while, but I finally got to put my thoughts to action, and this is the end result. So I'm excited, excited to share it with you
akhil maulwar
@akhilmaulwar · 0:51
You. First of all, thank you so much for this rare piece of poetry. Just amazed with your wonderful descriptions of a man and his beauty. I always had a thought why poetry is all about a woman. I was waiting for this kind of poet and you have warned my heart for your exceptional way of writing. Those minute details and adjectives just toll my heart. After reading this, I have come to the conclusion that women are beautiful both in and out. Thank you for sharing
Hello. Good morning. It is evident that you enjoy your poetry. You're very right. Men are much more than the strength they depict. They are all the adjectives you used. One adjective that I would have added is vulnerability. Our society does not give men the permission to be vulnerable, which is really sad. But I digress. Back to your poetry. I love listening to it
Cheyonia Wade
@Chey · 0:39
You. I really appreciate this poem. It was beautiful. I love your explanation. I love your accent. You definitely gained a new follower. I am. I'll be taking a listen to some more of your work tomorrow or today. It's after twelve today. But I really enjoyed this piece here and you are definitely very inspiring. So keep up the good work. It's much appreciated
Maurice Lekea
@malekea · 2:09
And you stated very well how the men can be. The combination of the strength. Candy, soft. You stated in a different way in your poem. I may be wrong, but that's how I feel it. And thank you again. There's so much to unpack here, but I prefer not to say too much because it's overwhelming, it's beautiful, and it's just joyful to your point to read your poem
Hello, Akhil, and thank you so much for your words. I think as a writer, whenever I write something. Right, you probably felt the same way. When you write something or you read it in this case, and people come along and they get it. They get it. Or they really, really enjoy what you try to express. And in this case, it's about that. I really wanted to capture the essence of a man and celebrate it. Because we celebrate women
Hello, pile. And you're absolutely right. You know, vulnerability most definitely belongs on the list. And as you have said, you know, society doesn't allow men to be vulnerable. And I think it's this expectation we place on them that they always have to be tough and chey always have to have everything handled. You know, Candy, I wanted to really diverge from that. So thank you for enjoying this poem, this poetry. And yes, you're right
Hello, Shay. And thank you for appreciating my work as a poet and a writer. That really means a lot to me. And also that I'm able to inspire you. It sounds like you're a writer as well. I think you mentioned in the previous world that you write, so I think we inspire one another. And that's the best part about it. We inspire and we learn from one another
So I'm glad that you picked up on all of these different elements because they did exist in the poem. So thanks again, Maurice, for enjoying, and I hope you have a wonderful day
Anu Sham
@Anu_Budhrani · 0:26
Good evening, candy life. Very well said. Poem. Usually man is described by tall, dark and handsome. But the physique that you described rough from the outside and soft from inside, warm from inside and tough from outside is very true. Men are also beautiful as women. Women are naturally beautiful, but men are beautiful from inside also. Thank you