Walking through the market choosing our favorite fruits. The way you steal the first bite and kiss my chin as it drips with that sweet nature juice. The fingertip heart that you've drawn on the steamy bathroom mirror. The way I can feel your eyes when they're locked on me in that I'm amazed by you stare. The dress that you've chosen which magnificently hugs my curves. The way that you always remind me that you are who I deserve
Nidhin George 🔷
@geo_rhymes · 2:22
So the emotion was way off. But d***, girl, this is amazing. I had no idea that you rhymed on such a graceful level. I so relate to your style, and it's beautiful. And I think we're the opposite ends of the spectrum when it comes to romantic poems. Because in this one, and also the last one that you shared, I noticed that you pick up on the positive, beautiful and bright side of love and romance
Carly D
@Astroality · 1:06
I adore that it's like we have these two different like you said, it's totally different perspectives, right? It's like the very feminine perspective, and it's very masculine perspective. It's like yin and yang, which is exactly how it's supposed to be. It would be no fun if we were exactly the same. I just love so much about this whole response, and I really appreciate you. I hope you are having a magical day
Nidhin George 🔷
@geo_rhymes · 1:35
I'm not going to be able to engage with poets from halfway around the world. It's morning for me over here. I mean, it's noon, it's 01:00 p.m. And from time for you but we are able to exchange ideas and thoughts on this app. I'm so happy and so grateful and yeah, I look forward to these sort of engagements. You have a good night
Glenn Mann
@GlennPriceMann · 0:14
This is such a great poem, such a great story told and just the description. And you can see the scene, the scenes being played out. It's a really beautiful work. Thank you for sharing
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Carly D
@Astroality · 0:28
It's. Thank you so much. I appreciate you. I love that you said you can see the scene, because that's always so important for me. In fact, I picture it in my head often before the words ever come out right. Like, I I put myself in that moment in those shoes and, like, how it makes me feel. And I'm glad that it does the same thing for you, even if it's just visually. So I appreciate you
Carly D
@Astroality · 1:52
And I hope the reader who's in taking it, also gets goosebumps. To me, that's always a huge mark of fantastic work, whether it's poetry, whether it's art, whether it's music, whatever it is, when I get the goosebumps, that for me, is like the moment you have arrived, you've really touched me in some way
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:25
Oh, my God. That's just so beautiful. Just so beautiful. Oh, I want it. Sign me up. Wow. To title. It my reasons. It's simple, but it's dead on. I