I'm the bacteria that is cosmic now contracting into a red dot. Do you see me now? Catching you everywhere my body attracting to a red dot disappearing into the atmosphere
Hello, Tara. It's been such a long time, and I really loved the concept of this poem and also the imagery. The photo that you put in the photo section was really nice, because as I was listening to your words, I just kept looking at the red dot, and at the same time, just as you were talking, I just imagined this red dot diffusing into the surface. And I think you mentioned the surface of various things
Tara pushkar
@Tarapushkar · 0:34
Hey, Candies, thank you so much for listening to it. And your appreciation really means a lot. You yourself is just a wonderful writer and you write so well. It's kind of totally mesmerizing with your lines each lines that you write, so yeah, so thank you so much. I've been just away, but I've been listening. I'm quite a listener. So thank you indeed and see you around. Bye
Ranjana Kamo
@Gamechanger · 0:06
That's a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. Have a lovely day. Bye