I don't know how many parts this will be. It's a bit on the longer side, so it may be a number of sections, but it's a very fun story. I really enjoy it. If anybody wants to know, like, how this went over in my writing class. Just to tell you that sometimes writing workshops don't know everything. That's correct. I got slammed in my writing workshop and then went on to win professional awards for it. So opinions are
Marc Sander
@MarcS1971 · 0:37
Great start so far. I just kind of came across this on my feet. I saw the part four and I started to read it and then I said, wait a minute, let me just go. This is a story I think I'm gonna want to get into. So I went back part one. I liked it so far. It came out just great pacing. At the beginning. I really liked the choice of starting off in bed