I pretend not to understand what type of danger you're talking about and take it as a challenge. Stare into your eyes so deep I can see your soul, something you've always been afraid to show. Time stops. I feel my heart pumped like never before. If this was a rom.com, we would guess. But the stopwatch rings before our lips collide and we act as if nothing almost happened. Like neither of us were scared to fall in love
Nidhin George 🔷
@geo_rhymes · 0:53
This is an amazing place to connect with other poets and also share your poetry. I myself have come across immensely talented poets who share amazing pieces of work. So I look forward to hearing more from you, and I hope you enjoy your time here. Have a great day ahead and a great rest of the weekend
A very good evening to you, Maraba. I am Kadambari Gupta. I just heard you as well. I think it was amazing. What a beautiful poem you have written. Every word just resonated with me. Such a beautiful poem. I am speechless. You know, it was so so I was feel so blessed to be able to hear your poetry. All I can say is just keep writing. I would like to hear more swells, more amazing poems from you. Take care
mannya nayar
@shesalliwannabe · 0:18
Maratha. I love how you describe, you know, how Hong Kong typically is. And I like how romanticized it is. I like how, you know, terrace of code it is. So, yeah, keep writing. And I loved it. Thank you so much for putting this out today
Vipin Kamble
@Vipin0124 · 1:05
You. Good evening, Marhaba. Beautiful poetry. It blew my mind. Your words, your characterization. Portrayal? The way you have voiced it, it's amazing. And the content, your poetry is beyond beyond imagination. It's beautiful. It made me travel my memory lane. You can understand what I'm trying to say. It's beautiful connecting to the listener. I was feeling myself as a part of the poet way. You are a blessed soul
I'm exploring from your poem as I said from a story of from bed to pillow to balcony and to peaches. These are all the places where we want to spend the time where we want to spend with him. Actually we move with him for more of the places place is the secondary but E is with us. This is the first part because we are spending time with him. We want him. The oil kisses even I felt the different glow of my skin
Marhaba Shakeel
@marhaba · 0:16
Hi. I'm so glad that you loved it so much. And I'm so glad it reminded you of a good time in your life. And I'm really grateful for all the compliments. It made me cry, you know. It was very sweet of you. Thank you so much
Lakshita Kapoor
@lakshitaaa01 · 0:39
Hello, Marhaba Lakshitaaa this side. Your poem contained beautiful imagery, metaphorical, language and even emotional depth. After hearing to such a poem, I was struck by the beauty and the artistry of the words that you used. It invoked feeling of love, longing, passion and even nostalgia. In my case, you really do have an unremarkable ability to capture the essence of human emotions and experiences and the beauty of the world around you through your words
Uchi. Uchita Galaiya
@Feather · 0:31
Hi. This is Feather. I just now listened to your spell. It is very beautiful and very nicely explained. Romcom, if it would be a Romcom port, all the things that you would have seen or might have been done was a very beautiful one. So I must say that I really liked it. So thank you very much. Keep posting like this and do keep posting more such wells. Thank you very much
reader 75063
@reader75063 · 1:02
You an interesting take on an interesting work. Sometimes a relationship makes us want to break, makes us want to fall apart, and we are fine with that. I'm not saying that it's the right way to do it, but if you need that pain in your life and if you need that time to find yourself to heal, then go for it
Khushi Chauhan
@khushi_kc · 0:37
Hi, Marhaba. I heard this poetry today and I'm so amazed to hear this. I heard each and every line so calmly and with whole of my heart. I could literally feel each and every line had a deep meaning to it and it just creates an imaginary world in the mind of listener. The lines were placed in such a way that so synchronized with each other and giving a smooth effect to that poetry. I would really love to hear more such poetry from you. Thank you so much
So listening to your poetry takes me back to those days where I was in love with the idea of being in love. And trust me, it's been a while that I missed that part of me. And your poetry fills me with so much that it makes me want to love again. It makes me want to love those words, because these words wouldn't betray these words wouldn't get the best of me and wouldn't ditch me in the moment where I need to