Saans Nikal jaati hai - Tum ho kaun (Ek Shayeri)
कुछ इस तरीके से आगे बढ़ती है की तुम हो कौन? तुम हो? कौन? जिंदगी में हो? या मौत हो? कौन? जिंदगी में हो? या मौत हो? पास आती हो? सांसे चलती हैं? दूर जाती हो? तब निकाल जाता है? तुम हो? कौन? जिंदगी हो? या मौत हो? पास आती हो? सांसे चलती है? दूर जाती हो? तब निकाल जाता है? अच्छा यह तो बता। 2 यह खुशबू तुम्हारी है? या? मैं दीवाना हो गया हूँ? अच्छा यह तो बता 2 की खुशबू तुम्हारी है? यह मैं दीवाना हो गया हूँ?
Siddhi Palande
@Book_gobbler · 0:18
this? was so? very very den rohit? thank you? so much for sharing? it? with s? remember? i think? these lines। बiकoलजारसाहब ही राइट की आपके बाद हर घड़ी हमने आपके साथ ही गुजारी है। so your point? and of reminded me of lines।
The Bookbot Theory
@Bookbot · 0:53
You bahati kupsura shari kahi apna. Thank you for sharing this. Miraya manaheke sharma ESA ekasi cheese hanajo baha kam shabdome bahati deep Message convey kal sate itana kib usko suneke kafi der takiya dinotak and sometimes in my case salutak apko zaru and islay abjab uski picheki effort kibatkato. I can totally relate to it because I understand the effort that goes behind in making the two sentences connect to each other in a way which is not exactly connecting, but they need to have a connect
Hi. Thank you for replying and thank you for giving your feedback. And most koshim will take the overwhelming hamirali Shari or Apkobasandai bossari Sharma Mana Ki Sharma nicotosto Batanga join Here or Milrayape And I'm very happy that you liked it. There are more to come, so I think I'll be writing more now because I didn't give this I kind of want to hope that, yes, I can, and definitely I will. Thank you for sharing your views and thank you for liking it
preethy uthup
@peeli · 0:27
You. Hi. It's a very well written poem, and it's got everything, like a quaintness to it and a sweetness to it and some flavor to it also. So I kind of liked it. And you articulated it so well. It's beautiful. I would say take care. Bye
Hey, pretty. Thank you for replying on my spell. And what I believe is that the amount of hard work goes into it because that poem or that Shirey doesn't come out just after within 1 hour or one day. It takes around a week or so, maybe more than that. So I think that is one of the secret which I have. It takes a lot of time