Two things true at once confidence and loneliness for the gaze that owns my joy given permission by some code she cracked in me with her smile my bed has been unmade an homage to messy times when hours blur and cold wooden floors heat up with the passing of dancing feet
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:27
You. Oh, my God. This is so beautiful. And it touches me and I resonate. I feel it. I feel it. Two sides to every coin, I guess. The confidence and the loneliness. This is beautiful. And let's just keep our beds unmade. Whatever. It can be what it is. I appreciate you posting this. This is really resonating with me. Thank you
It's quite beautiful. This reminds me of a song by John Baas. Jesse. Come home. Jesse. To be precise. Beautiful, lovely, and a lot of things emerged. One of them was a story of a woman who has been battered all her life by her abusive husband. Maybe someday I'll be able to share that one. But sincerely, this is quite true to life and quite true to ourselves. Thank you
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Moe Johnson
@NeophyteSavant · 0:20
Hello, Deborah. Not only do I like the poem, I love this type of poetry because it makes me think. I listened to the poem maybe about five or six times. The words were brilliantly put together. This is truly a tapestry of hidden beauty. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it