Poem: Smouldering Embers
If you're someone who's more visual, likes to follow along as someone narrates someone like me narrates a poem, the words are in the photo section of this well. So the title of this poem is called smoldering embers, dancing flames. Lust as raw fuel. Depriving oxygen. Suffocating pleasure. Sublime. Quick as the spark ignited the fire. Scaling, escaping, vaporized carbon, raining ash on the fallen. Be not sad, dearest
akhil maulwar
@akhilmaulwar · 0:32
My God. I am completely awestruck with your poem. Your writing is exceptional. Your words are like arrows dipur in honey. Very impressive. And the way you explain everything in details, it's truly amazing. Thanks for igniting my heart. And thanks for sharing this lovely poem watching. Have a great day. Bye
Instead of the potato, it was that nice, warm, satisfying feeling that you're left with afterwards. As always, I am a big, huge fan of your poetry and your recitation, and I'm always waiting for the next one. So see you around. Bye
Hello Akhil. And I am so glad that my poetry has ignited your heart. Especially this poem. I take that as an achievement. And I also hope that the arrows dipped in honey aren't too sharp. And they don't pierce your heart or too deeply or hurt you. I really enjoyed that vivid imagery. And all in all, thanks for making me, you know, smile a bit this morning. And for. For encouraging me. So, thank you
Hello, Kyle. And yes, I've had these roasted potatoes like you cover it in aluminum foil, throw them in the fire, dig them out, and then they're really, really tasty. And fun fact is, I love campfires, and I love barbecues, especially the cold barbecues, the smell and the taste that just gets infused into the. Into the meat and stuff. Anyway, I got carried away for the moment. Thank you for responding. Thanks for making it fun
Lolita Eaddy
@Woodiemountain · 0:12
Hey, Candy, this poem was very beautiful, and I love the way you explained it. Keep up the good word