And the reason I call it experimental, because the structure of the poem itself is very unique in the sense that each stanza has three sentences, and usually in a rhyme scheme. We use the ab format, right, where you usually either use couplets, where two sentences have words that rhyme, ending with words that rhyme, or you use alternate. Right. A. You use Abab. Right. But this one was just aaa. Oh, no, man, that was really lame
akhil maulwar
@akhilmaulwar · 2:59
So actually, I have heard a story that there was a person who was hiding his emotions and feelings all. So one day the amount of feelings was exceed and then exceeded. Then he had put those feelings and emotions on a paper. Someone read those feelings and named it as poetry. Candy. The people applauded him for his work. So then again, he started hiding his tears. So that is how poetry made. That is how a sad poetry made. Don't say that
Blair Redmond
@blairbearing · 0:36
There are all the things that need to be taking place in this person, and they're expressing it. So I love the way that you did this. Thank you so much for inviting me
You. Good morning. There's a saying which goes best things in life come in small packages. And this was definitely one from my various, various failed, I must say, attempts at poetry. I know how difficult and how energy consuming create writing or composing this poem might have been, so hats off to that. And I really enjoyed it. It really stuck a chord. And I hope to hear many more of your poems
But the people who are reading it don't really get it. So it's a very interesting thing. It is a very interesting thing to be a poet. And also, you're right, it's more than just like a way of expressing sad things. It doesn't necessarily have to be just sad. It can be a wide array of. Not just emotions, but a wide array of topics, a wide array of things. And I really enjoy writing about many different things under the sun
And I wanted to show that. I wanted to show that growth, that transformation, that metamorphosis through the various phases of this poem. And I'm glad that you appreciated it
It has to be something that tells you something, but in the shortest way possible. So I'm glad you appreciated it. And it was a pain, it was a struggle to write, but I also enjoyed doing it. So thanks for appreciating. Thanks for listening to this poem, and I hope you have a wonderful weekend
Maurice Lekea
@malekea · 1:47
And I really mean what I'm saying here. But I don't know how I can really respond in a way that is satisfying. Because when it comes to emotions, we have many ways of describing our emotions. Sometimes we don't even find the right words how to express them. But for those like you, who find a way to express the emotion as a kudo, congratulations