Changing its route which it will never had before. Wondered about her back. Studied her like my past. Still with no intention of watching her face to face. I have no intentions of facing my fate. I just followed. I couldn't allow myself to say hello. I just followed until I lost her from my sight. But still wonder what would have been like to see her face. There is always this phrase that drinks behind each day. Fate isn't the end of the race
Aishani Chatterjee
@Aishani · 0:51
Hi, Akhil. I don't know if I've said this before or not. I don't remember. But your writing has the kind of quality which immediately makes the listener or the reader just visualize the entire thing. The imagery that you use is very rich, and the descriptions which you use just seamlessly evoke the kind of imagination that you would want your readers or your listeners to have. And I always end up picturizing whatever you write, and that's so beautiful
akhil maulwar
@akhilmaulwar · 0:43
Hi Aishani. Thank you so much for your wonderful words. I am very glad to know that you have visualized the total scenario which I tried to express through my poetry. It's really amazing feeling for any writer or poet. If the listener or reader can correlate and feel the same what the poet actually does. And yeah, you have said this before from a piece of poetry. Angel at the coast. I am feeling overwhelmed. Thank you so much. You made my day happy. Holy
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Hi akhil, your words are so captivating. Trust me, I heard your swell nearly three to four times before giving my reply because I really enjoyed each and every line. The way you described the unknown face, the way you describe the urge in you through the lines, it was really, really awesome and I always feel the kind of description you give will really make a lot of difference
