Rubab Sandhu
@ummerubab11 · 2:02
"Burn To Lit Others"
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This is how the life goes on. If one is meant to go, then the other is meant to come. Life serves nothing but the opportunities to make me more kind and compassionate. And this is the essence of every man and every passion, every race and every nation. Burn yourself to let others and create such a legacy that nobody ever did. So this is it. Thank you. Thank you so very much for bearing me
Just like that way we can also learn to burn or melt, to give others a life, hope to live, hope to work and hope to inspire others. Thank you for sharing such a motivational and inspirational poem. Hoping to get more from you like this
Akanshya Kajol
@AKA381 · 1:24
Hello, ma'am. The poem Bird to Lead Others is a really amazing poem. It has a tone of motivational and inspirational words. Also, the thing that you have told that, yes, we have to bird to lead others. But I wanted to say this thing that when we burn ourselves, we grow and through us others grow. So the use of metaphors and the literary devices are amazing
Huma Ansari
@HumaAnsariwrite · 0:51
Walai huma salam Allah or abholici yes, you are right many times we have to burn ourselves to let others life is not so easy it is very hard a kind person has to suffer much nothing is permanent if one goes don't be sad because something better will going to be happen very swell you have recited your poetry keep writing thank you
Hi, rubab sandhu. I am Kadam Gupta. I really like your poem. Burn to lit others. I think it was very well written and we should let us burn if we want to lit others, let others do well. So it was well conceived, conceptualized and written. Best wishes to you and keep writing such amazing poems
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Is needed by us so that we can support lit others person in their life to reach their goal. So it's an amazing topic that you have talked and I really like it and hope to hear much more and thank you so much for this amazing one
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