Poetry of Life
@smoothVibes32 · 3:22
Be slient no more ( 2022 - and beyond
It's like I'm trying to scream out for help. But it's a tight steel box around me. And so I'm as loud as I want to be, but it's silent because no one can hear me. And so I wrote that poem. I was thinking about it tonight. I kind of wrote a remix to it. And this is just the change version of me of that poem. Silent, but loud. I made a change in who I keep around
Rocío (Ro) Christensen
@rocio · 1:22
You read poems at a funeral, you sing songs. It's for the soul. So I think it's really beautiful that you could take that time and delve into poetry. And I really appreciate that you read us both versions of your poem. I like what you did, and it's very honest. I like the line about the dog, about becoming a dog or being like a dog. That was a nice image. You're should share more. I'm excited to hear more from you