Let me be your everything and do all that I can do fill my passion flow through time and soar, so very high spread the wings of love and let your body fly touch my skin so tenderly and let me absorb the feel offer me forever and kiss my lips to close the deal we can spend our days and nights wrapped up in love we can wake to each other's touch sent from high above and heaven can watch us sleeping as we close our weary eyes
You are an amazing writer, and every time I hear your work now, it just resonates with me so much and I feel even more of a kinship and a sisterhood with you with every piece you share. So thank you. Thank you so much. Beautiful
The Poet
@Handsomelouii · 0:10
Yes. Great peace. You definitely slayed that. Keep writing. Keep speaking. I love it. Thank you for sharing
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:14
Oh, thank you so much. Makes me feel great when I get good feedback on something. And I appreciate the little drop on the sleigh. You know, I try to do what I can. Thanks for hopping in and listening. And I hope you find more of my stuff just as interesting. Thanks again
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:42
Good morning. This was just so expansive. And not only was it about giving completely and fully, but about allowing yourself to receive. And how great can we love? I mean, such an invitation to let go of all of our fears and step boldly into this. I adored it. Thank you so much
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:39
You. This is actually a great moment for me because I look up to you for the words that you put out there in your work. And so to have you comment that you enjoyed my piece is freaking amazing, to be honest. And not only enjoyed it, but got it. Totally got it. Because as vulnerable as we can be to put it out there, like, God, just put it out there. I don't know, it was pretty deep
Natasha Webb
@NatashaNoel · 0:38
Beautiful. That's beautiful. Every one of your poems so far, I just love. I think you're brilliant. You're talented, and that was just beautiful. It just was. Keep it up, girl. Keep it up. I just love it. Looking forward to hearing the rest if you have a good evening
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:16
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you very much. I appreciate you for taking the time to listen to it. Mine's a mixed bag for sure. I've been digging everything you put out, too. And yeah, you're going to bed late. I know what you're doing. You've been up swelling this s***'s addictive. All right, girl, I'll talk to you soon
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:39
Ah. Have I mentioned lately how much I love you? Every time you leave a message on one of my poet, I am like floored because your stuff is so good. But I'm so glad that you can resonate with it and I am so lucky to have you in my life now and be able to experience the kind of love and appreciation that you give me and I hope I do the same for you and can't wait to talk to you soon
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 1:05
You. So I probably sound crazy because I have a cold and I was crying because I read somebody else or I listened to on Swell, somebody else's poem that I just reswelled. And if you're into poetry and feel like a good cry, it'll be the last poem that I just reswelled. Awesome work. But I wanted to slay. Thank you
Erica Jean
@HeyItsErica · 0:26
You. Hi, Renee. Slave, this is Erica soul journey one k. I love poetry, and I really do love your poem as well. It's just very smooth. I love the words that were used, the imagery, the rhythm and the rhyme of it. It was definitely great. So keep doing your thing
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:22
You. Thank you. Thank you so much for just taking the time to listen to it and give me the feedback. And I'm glad that you liked it. I really am. I am so into poetry, so I totally get where you're coming from, and I hope everything I put out is just like that, just where you can flow with it. Thank you very much
Wow. Let me just say, that poet was so beautiful. I felt every bit of your passion, every bit of your love and caring. It was I think it's one of the most beautiful love poems I've ever heard. And keep them coming, because believe me, you really dom slay with your poetry. You really do. Thank you
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:34
You. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you so much. Not only for taking the time to listen to it, but for what you said. Because to me, the most important thing is that people feel what I'm writing. And the fact that you said you could feel it, that's the best compliment anybody could ever, ever, ever pay me. And I appreciate you so much for dropping that in my lap. Made me smile tonight. I appreciate you. Thank you so much
