@sylvar
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@sylvar · 1:15

"Sonnet 1" written by R. Sylvar

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Wildly obsessed over admiration, kindness feels the soul of venomous shatter hearts leaning love anonymous resentful burdens away on my patience lead me Romeo to my desperation love shall fart in the endlessness detached soulmates leave my shell echoes past scars to your destruction of expression. Their sweet, fondness weakness of mortals guides rumination blood coursing through my veins unconditional yearning strikes fatal statuous hopes love prompts me insane love men's dreary hearts and lights its candles warm fills a void like thunderclaps in the rain

Sorrowful take on the theme of love and infatuation. Inspired by Shakespearean sonnets. Music: "Innocence" by Dong Min Ho ("Tempted" OST). #poem #love

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@ayishah.hasni
Ayishah Hasni
@ayishah.hasni · 0:32
Hey, Romessa, another really great poem. I absolutely love the language in this as well. I really am glad that you're sharing all your poetry because I love hearing it. And your delivery on every poem is so flawless. Oh, my gosh, you can hear so much emotion in every line. And the way that the volume changes and the tone changes. Very, very good. You should definitely keep reading your poetry. So great job. Also, your school projects sound really fun
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@rudash
Rud S
@rudash · 0:28
Hi, Vanessa, I really enjoyed your poem, and I think you're honestly getting just much better at them in general. But the one thing I really liked is the one the background music was really good. And I love how you mentioned, like, Romeo in your poem as well, because I've been going over in my English class, and I think just like the way you describe the connection between this lover and the other person was really well done. And I think it was so interesting
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