To dawn I am awake but still I dream if I give in to the night moon sings to me my creative consort filling me with visions of what we could be the words come spilling up from my womb and all over you. Their gift is rain for your parched soul. I have thirst too. I coalesce to get lost in these secret lyrics of dawn. Play chamber music and drink warm milk until my head falls back and my eyes close with congratulations. My heart always knew this was possible
Becky Butler
@bc75 · 2:18
I expect to see Him in my life. I expect to see Him move in my circumstance, move on my behalf. I expect to see I expect to see my king. I expect to see my Jehovah. I expect to see my God. I'm learning to do these a little bit at a time, a little bit of free flow, just talking and sharing and letting what bubble up and letting it share. I want to get used to talking on the fly, talking on the cup
J Stout
@DarkMoonMusings · 0:16
There is something so sweet and full of hope. Maybe in this piece. I love that line about my heart. Always knew that this was possible. Really beautiful
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:25
Hi. I'm so glad the piece resonated for you. And, yes, I, too, am working on those things that you were mentioning. And I really enjoy the conversational off the cuff ability here on Swell. So I look forward to listening to your pieces and doing the same. Thank you. You. Bye
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:15
Hi. Yes. Yes, definitely hope was at the core of the themes for me in this one. Thank you so much for giving and a listen. I appreciate your feedback
Khalid Hanif
@theElvnth_Our · 0:53
Hey. Good morning. I had to take a moment to tell you how wonderful your poem, your Ode to dawn was. I enjoyed it thoroughly it was the sentiment that simmered softly and the exploration and visuals of love and it's many many manifestations and the piece felt personable relatable it was really a wonderful expression and it made me smile. Kudos. Kudos. Kudos. Incredible, right? I loved your delivery and thanks for sharing and looking looking forward to more be well
Adenike Nana Esie
@nourishyou · 0:13
This was pure ambrosia. I loved every second of it. Absolutely delicious