@Loloflow
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 1:09

I Saw My Soul Up There

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I saw my soul up there in 03:00 a.m. Torment and dawnbreak affairs in ravens wings and stardust hair I couldn't explain it, I didn't dare. But I saw my soul up there ancient chariot with courage to spare those songs were welcome solar flares burning through crowns of my past despair I felt my soul up there desperate to climb those rocky stairs to retrieve that vulnerable me laid bare I clawed and scratched and yelled you there. You're my soul up there

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@JacquelineEK
Jacqueline Kharouf
@JacquelineEK · 1:25
That sound keeps coming through the poem and that's really cool how you keep it interesting without sounding without making it sound too rhyme, I guess. And I also thought that the conflict or the separation between a soul and itself is really interesting and reminded me a lot of Emily Dickinson. So, yeah, your work is amazing and keep sharing it. It's great to hear and really set a nice tone for my day. So I thank you and I appreciate it. Thanks
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dylia hart
@hart2heart · 0:20
Hi, Laura. Thank you for sharing that beautiful poem. I love that depiction of healing. It's just so visual and it's like it mimics the heavens, but really, you know, you're looking for yourself. It's so beautiful. Thank you for sharing
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DawnMaria Bradley
@Pixiepoet4life · 2:26
It was so just amazingly sweet and to the point, and yet it was ethereal in the way that you delivered it and so mystical. I just love it. I love it. I saw my soul out there. I love the cadence, the way you spoke, the lines. I love the imagery. I love the picture that you chose to post with this point. I love every part of it. And I just want to tell you that you write in such a beautiful, moving way
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Quinne Brown Huffman
@Quinne · 0:31

@Loloflow

Laura, what an incredible piece. The finding our unity with Soul. I so relate those 03:00 A.m episodes. Thank you for the imagery and the poetry and your stunning voice. So enjoy your work and your sharing and your expression. Just beautiful. Delicious. Thank you
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@Renee_Slay
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:24
This is so touching and just simply beautiful. Like, I am really shook. This is such a beautiful poem. You're an amazing writer and I appreciate you sharing this. This is awesome. This is so very awesome. Thanks again. Touched me. Definitely. Thank you
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@Loloflow
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:27

@JacquelineEK

Hi, Jacqueline. Thank you so much for listening and for your very gracious feedback. To be included in the same sentence as Emily Dickinson is just, wow, an honor. Kind of swooping about that. She's just one of my all time faves. But thanks so much. Really appreciate your kind words
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Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15

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Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:57

@Pixiepoet4life

Oh, Don maria, thank you so much. I really appreciate your words. And I, too, am so grateful for this platform. As you said, it can feel isolating, I think. You know, a poet is kind of a rare breed. We see things from the big picture, and we're also very sensitive to the very small, the infinitesimal, and not everyone sees through those lenses
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@nourishyou
Adenike Nana Esie
@nourishyou · 1:22
I love this. This is now my ode to the 03:00, a.m. Witching hour. And I'm up at 03:00 a.m. Like clockwork, having that experience most nights. So here's to the 03:00 a.m. Soul searches. I loved this, the astronauts. And it was gorgeous, the repetition. There was something just deeply personal about this. I think so many of us can relate to that kind of internal searching. It's almost an emptiness
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@Loloflow
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 1:03

@nourishyou

Hey, Nikay. Yeah? I'm glad it resonated for you. Last four or five years have been quite challenging and also beautiful because went through quite a dark night of the soul. And I think that's happening for a lot of people on the planet right now. We're in the middle of a great awakening, in my humble opinion. And that starts at the individual level, but sending you love and support in whatever you're dealing with it
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