And some words played between us to and fro on which lost the more by our love. The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing alive enough to have strength to die. And a grin of bitterness swept thereby like an ominous bird a wing. Since then keen lessons that love deceives and rings and wrong have shaped to me your face and a God cursed sun and a tree and a pond edged with grayish leaves
Deborah Pardes
@DBPardes · 0:14
Hey, Jason, I just wanted to let you know that you have a listener in me, and I appreciate you being here, and I just love the way you're using this community to share poetry. Really awesome. Thank you so much
Rocío (Ro) Christensen
@rocio · 0:16
Hey Jason, thank you so much for sharing. That was a really gorgeous poem. I'd never heard it before. You also have a great reading voice, so I'm really looking forward for another poetry moment. Thank you again for sharing
Jason McCulley
@DJ_Jaydream · 0:24
Hello, and thank you very, very much for your kind words. It really means a lot to me. I am so happy that you enjoy my poetry readings. I do plan to read some more, so I'm I'm glad that you are enjoying it. And stay tuned. I have a lot more planned to come, so thank you very much. Bye
Jason McCulley
@DJ_Jaydream · 1:01
I find it myself to be very cathartic. I would probably do it if there was no one listening at all, but I'm glad there are some that are enjoying it and continue to want to enjoy poetry moment. Thank you very much and I hope you have an outstanding day. Thank you. Bye
Krishna Telang
@Krishnaroxs · 0:23
Hey, there. Krishna aside. And the poetry was amazing. But I would like to apologize that I don't know much about poetry. So I cannot offer a positive input here. But one thing I can say is that you would make a killer Darth Vader. You can become great voice actor, I guess, because you have that gravitas in your voice. So, King of the good work. And thank you for posting this. Bye
Jason McCulley
@DJ_Jaydream · 0:47
Thank you very much for your compliments. I don't think I've had a nicer compliment than to say that I'd make a killer Darth Vader. That's really cool. Thank you very much for that. I'm glad you're enjoying the poetry. The good thing about poetry is that you don't have to know anything about poetry to enjoy poetry. Just sit back and listen and let it move you or make you laugh and make you cry or anything else in the emotions
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Krishna Telang
@Krishnaroxs · 0:26
Hey there, Krishna this side. And thank you so much for such a sweet reply. And I'm really grateful that you appreciate your own work and you know that you're a great artist. And yeah, the only thing we need to know about poetry is that you're listening to poetry. And and that is enough. So I am laid back. I am sitting now, and I'm just looking forward to your content. And let's just hope that it moves me