You speak my name like a prayer of benediction. Your lips whisper unsung songs across my skin and I am Sanctified. I learn your secrets. The hills and valleys of your body's lands and feel the shape of your heart in my trembling hands. I am Eve Cradling, the apple and you are the serpent. Temptation personified. We will burn this love down. Passion to pain. Fire turn to ashes. You'll become lines on my face and scars on my heart
Arya Sunyata
@theheartdrive · 1:07
I love that you went there. This is so good. It's just so to the point, so raw, so direct. Those moments that you take with you forever and the way you close that out. Wow. I have to listen to this again. This just shared that quality of sacred and that line between what's sacred and profane. And yet what gets elevated is wow. I'm definitely going listened to this one a few times. Great that you went on this topic
J Stout
@DarkMoonMusings · 0:24
So I'm going to go a little fangirl here. But I love it when I see that you've replied not just to my pieces, but to other people, because it fascinates me the way your mind works and what you see in here in other people's pieces. It really is fascinating
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Blair Redmond
@blairbearing · 0:28
I love it. It reminds me of an ad that I saw. Forbidden fruit is often the most enjoyable. And you said you are Eve holding the apple and he is the serpent. Let's get biblical on them. Yes. Yes. Beautiful. And the picture you painted was just is extraordinary. Thank you
J Stout
@DarkMoonMusings · 0:09
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for coming by and taking a listen and taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it
Arya Sunyata
@theheartdrive · 1:20
OOH imma share the love. I will also go a little bit fangirl right back here because I love the way your mind works and how it's this really sharp razor's edge and the way you get to the heart of things and and you can you can get to something in like five words that some people take like 20 to get to. You just go 12345 bull right there. And it's just fascinating to me how you see so nakedly the way things are
Adenike Nana Esie
@nourishyou · 0:58
Oh, I remember reading this, and I remember how I felt when I read it. And I think I like the delivery even more. It had a kind of stealth to it, and it's juicy for you. So there was this kind of unraveling momentum and all of that big feeling just kind of captured in that last line, holding on to that sense of indulgence and forever. Very evocative work. Very provocative work. I really enjoyed this piece