And now the fire is contained, each wanting nothing more but to lean in and get lost in the bliss of each other's lips treading ever so lightly, so not to disturb the natural order of things because they don't want it if it's not organic
Adenike Nana Esie
@nourishyou · 0:34
You. There is so much I want to say about this piece, but I'm still swimming in the feeling of it, in the journey of it, the innate truth of it. I really like this piece of writing. I think it's my favorite well of yours so far. All the feels
Khalid Hanif
@theElvnth_Our · 1:11
Greetings, Blair Glid. I have taken an opportunity to bask in this piece that you've offered. I feel a deep relation to its sentiment. I find it very relatable on so many levels as one two souls navigate and choreograph intimacy. The push and pull nature of it all you captured it marvelously. I really enjoyed it for its relatability and B for its elocution. It's a marvelous piece and it's a its honesty is greatly appreciated. Looking forward to hearing more
Blair Redmond
@blairbearing · 0:16
Thank you for your words. Thank you for listening. But I am just most happy that you were able to feel it and understand it and appreciate it. Happy Sunday where I am
Blair Redmond
@blairbearing · 0:22
Khalid. Most appreciated. Most appreciated. Thank you for your kind words. Thank you for listening. And I hope to be inspired to write more poems like this. We shall see. We shall see. It all depends on my current muse
Delbert Cespedes
@Xgzabeher · 1:50
That's what I pick up from it. And the need to fight, to continuously fight for this connection, it's not right away, it's not easy, it's not simple. But I felt the tension and the struggle in this piece for that organic spark. Not just any other spark or any other connection, but one that is organic. Very short piece. Lot was said. Bless up
Blair Redmond
@blairbearing · 0:15
Hello. Thank you. Thank you for listening. I have been off of here for some months, so that's why it took me so long to respond. But I definitely appreciate your thoughts as well as your accent. I hope you have a great day